Research and planning- Evaluation question 3- What have you learnt from your auidience feedback?

Script for evaluation question 3

Poster-

Before

• there was no background on the poster
• steel tongs font too big
• there is less of steel tongs font, need more
• These are from the teachers feedback
• the logos are too big on a poster

After

• now it has a background
• it has two actors on the poster
• it uses gradient and a bit of colour balance
• The font is different comparing to what I made before

Magazine

before

• On screen font was not normal for a magazine
• there was no colour as there was a problem.
• font sizes and style were too big and style was very different to what you see on a normal magazine.
• cover lines were all placed on the left hand side going down.
• there was no slug line, barcode or issue date.

After

• I was able to get the colour back on the magazine
• the colours that I have used are red, black, white and a blue tinge sort of colour
• On screen font has changed
• I copied the layout of an empire magazine
• I have included everything on the magazine that you normally have.

Trailer
before

• it was too light because we filmed in the afternoon around 1.00pm
• scream was delayed
• some shots were very long
• font style titles were not very good to use for our trailer
• production and distribution logos were very big and zoomed in couldn't see all of it.
• we were not suppose to show the villain's face
• needed to add sound as there was no sound.

after

• did filming in dark so it was mostly low key lighting
• added a different font style
• added some sounds of our own that we created and used some from garage band
• changed shots to make them short
• changed scream so that it was not delayed and now it is perfect
• hid our villains face to create suspense and make the whole trailer