Research and planning- Treatment stage

After presenting the two proposals to my teacher, me and my partner have decided to use a bit of the first proposal and a bit of the second proposal. Now we are going to plan out the order of our horror genre trailer in a bullet pointed order.

1. we going to start with our BBFC rating .
2. then we are going to show our production logo and distribution company.
3. we are then going to show an establishing shot of the college to tell where our location is and what it would likely be based on.
Then it shows a black screen with subtitles saying ''Terror lies within , secrets are being told ''.
4. Next we are going to have a wide shot of our actors in the school just having a group conversations as friends.
5. we going to have a fast editing pace and a long shot like a montage showing the lights. Long, lonely corridor students chatting.
6. long shot of same long, lonely corridor strange things happening lights go off.
7. wide shot same lonely corridor lights have gone off it becomes very dark, glowing, ghost shadow appears.
8. long shot of two actors walking through the door, see the lights go off again and see the ghost figure walk out the other door in the dark.
9. Action shot of the the two actors running up the stairs to the others.
10. we then are going to have a mid shot of the two actors telling the others what just happened.
11. lights go out as they converse they hear some one scream and when it comes back on, one of the actors is found unconscious on the floor with a high angle of the others looking down at her.
12. panicked, the others run out of the college and we have a wide shot of them running out the college gate.
fades out to a black screen again ''The awakening has returned terror has just began''
13. A long shot of the actors/students resting near a park around the Conner breathing heavily from running and glad they have escaped from college.
14. then we going to have a wide shot of them walking into the park.
15.wide shot showing the different path ways in the park and the position of the actors.
16. then it fades into a fast editing mid shot.
More subtitles as it fades out to black again ''Trouble lurks around the corners,''
17. same scene same editing pace to a mid shot of a stalker watching them.
18. same scene but the camera pans back to the shot of the girls
19. two shot of the two actors conversation .
20. long shot of two of the actors walking away leaving the others and heading towards the direction of the stalker.
Subtitles saying ''The unseen is revealed''
21. suddenly a close up of the psycho face .
22. A jump cut to a knife in his hand using a mid shot view.
23. Then a jump cut back to the others running and screaming in different directions,
24. a long shot back to one of the actors dead on the floor with blood on the shirts and a log on top of the actor.
25. flashing shots of different chase scenes ambient sounds and the psycho lifting a log.
26. it then goes quiet one of the actors preferably the last one seen is standing under a tree resting and trying to catch a breath whilst breathing heavily.
27. then a high angle of the psycho up on the tree looking down at the actor resting underneath
28. then it fades out to black.
29. fade back in to the psycho behind the actor.
''There is no where to hide''
30. actor screams loudly using a close up.
31. fades into black with writing on the screen saying ''Coming Soon'' .